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  鉴于大家都理解的原因,我的论文英文摘要不合格,用翻译软件翻译的嘛,我是看不懂的,嘿嘿,恰逢城里有这个板块,希望城友们精通英文的帮忙校对一下,但求无语法错误,语句通顺、、、

汉语原文就不在这里贴了,浪费空间,就把英文翻译放在这里帮忙修改一下吧,多谢!

Chinese calligraphy art has the very long application history in the botanical garden design, they in the cultural tradition, the form expression have the same place, the highest goal all pursues the ideal condition. We also need to absorb and to profit from in the classical landscape gardening thought in the modern botanical garden design to the Chinese calligraphy art application thought, applies the calligraphy art esthetics thought during the botanical garden design,increases the botanical garden art the artistic effect, demonstrates the botanical garden ideal condition. This article key discussion calligraphy art and the botanical garden design in cultural, the form
connection, and the artistic style and the cultural connotation which displayed to each one has carried on the comparison, the goal seeks their common rule, sought their deep place the cultural connotation,promulgated between the Chinese calligraphy art and the botanical garden art cultural art connection, the goal was has the inspiration to the calligraphy art in the botanical garden design application and the development to have the contribution. And the union example has analyzed the calligraphy art in the botanical garden design function,elaboration calligraphy art in the botanical garden design application way, with calligraphy art in modern botanical garden design
application present situation. And union new times calligraphy art and the botanical garden design development change characteristic, seeks their new union spot.


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Chinese calligraphy art has a very long application in the history of the botanical garden design, it has a traditional cultural of  expression in the same place, the highest goal all pursues the ideal condition.(oh i think it is hardly to understand. But no grammer error )We still need to absorb the edge(means advantage) from the classical landscape gardening theory  in the modern botanical garden design to the Chinese calligraphy art application theory . It applies the calligraphy art esthetics theroy in the botanical garden design which increasing the effect of botanical artistic garden art.It demonstrates the botanical garden ideal condition.This article key discussion calligraphy art and the botanical garden design in cultural.The connection, artistic style and the cultural connotation which displayed to each other have carried on in the comparison, the goal of seeking their common rule, searching their deep place in the cultural connotation, has promulgated between the Chinese calligraphy art and the botanical garden art cultural art connection.It also needs inspiration of the calligraphy art in the botanical garden design application and the development to contribute.With the present situation of calligraphy art in modern botanical garden design application ,the union example has analyzed the calligraphy art in the botanical garden design function,elaboration calligraphy art in the botanical garden design application way.To seek their new union spot,union of new times calligraphy art and the botanical garden design development changes characteristics.


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the long sentence is easire to write but harder to understand.

so i suggest u to use single sentences instead of the long ones.


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第一次把别人的文章改的面目全非

残不忍睹啊


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  多谢多谢!

  因急着用,发帖子后的第二天就劳烦外语系的同学给改了一下,便用了。

  今天上午,我的论文答辩结束了、、、、

  感谢“济”!


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恍如昨日~~~

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